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I am out of town and won't be back until April 8, but I'm available after that, and would love to work at camp again this spring, if you have hours available.
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1.Voy al parque a dar un paseo.
2.Ellos van en tren a Poznan.
3.Que vaya en tranvía a la escuela.
4.Voy a la piscina.
5.Ellos vuelan en avión a Barcelona.
6.Moju padre
diriglleva un barco a los Estados Unidos.
7.No me gusta tomar un autobús.

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My name is Patryk, I am a pupil of a third-grade mechanical school. I goam toin the third grade inof electrical direction. I chose this school and this direction because it suited my interest.

I want to go on a trip to Italy
, organized by the project "POWER", because I wantould like to sexperience whowat the work in .....

If you are very serious to import timber from Indonesia, it is good and iI will support you as your partner and brother.

I already informed the mahogany suppliers about your visiting schedule and ask
ed them to extend their price to me, but they can't give their promise to keep the price until next m.....

I would call Samsung directly as a starting wpointh. However, Australian Consumer Law overridies any warranty provided by a manufacturer. The consumer law allows for items to be of reasonable quality, and last a reasonable amount of time.
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If there are some mistakes, please correct my doc.ument and suggest ways for me to develop my answers tof the questions.
[Q1] Have you ever received any scholarships before?
Ans.: No, I have not received any kind of scholarship before.

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Dear mMike,
My name is Carmen
,. wWe meet at the landscape meeting and. I would Aappreciated it if you could Pprovide me with any information that iI could use about the Fflowers that we used or planted Andor any thing else that you might think would be useful for my information .
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 Many years later, I was looking at a  blog post and I found it to be interesting. The writer had posted their writing along with a picture. I said to myself, "I can write just as well, t.The motivation kicked in; what triggered me to write was not just what the writer had to say, but it was the picture.....

rResidential schools were established aby the federal government of Canada, which partnered with the Anglican, Catholic, United, and Presbyterian churches to assimilate indegigenous children into the wWestern culture.
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Sehr Ggeehrte Frau Cornelia,

bim Anhangtte finden Sie im Anhang die Klage und den Eilantrag. .iIch habe auch die Entscheidung des Gerichts geschickt.

Hinweis

iIch konnte nicht alle die Dokumente in einemr Email senden , weil dsie Dokzumente Ggröoße sind .
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WHelclome Aunt.,

First of all, I w
ould likeant to thank you for your earlier letter. Just, likwhen you asked to describe where I was on vacation.

On holiday, I was in Manchester in the UK. The weather was wonderful there. Although Iit was in the rainy season., Tthe sun was shining and it did not rain. Although I was there for 4 days .....

You had fall fallen so deep in love with her that she could see right through you;, and when she questioned you, why did you close the doors on love? The moment you left, she started missing you. It was then that she knew that she had fallen for you. It was your love she was trapped in,; she was surrounded by f.....

Hi Roy,
On lLast sSaturday, I went with my family ton a cycleing trip. We decided to go on this trip, becoause my father suggestoled that we must go to cycldue trip becouse there is beautiful weather. I wasn't happy fromr that reason, but I didn't haven't a choice.
We were riding
3for three hours, and we got to an interesting place. It was lLake Ch.....

For a trip, I will need sports shoes, a small tent, a sleeping bag, a flashlight, a waterproof jacket, a map of the forest, a large backpack, new sweat pants, and sunglasses.
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The CBD is also a very popular place for school trips. It is because this part of Birmingham shows very well sthowe differences between poor and rich community.Often in the place of old, vacant buildings. are built nNew, modern structures, like hotels and theaters, are often built in the place of old vacant buildings. The public library visible in the photo is a building ope.....

I I'm writing to you because I want to tell you something about the concert at whichat I wasent to last time.
I was there with my neighbor John
. tThe concert was last Friday. It started at 8 p.m. and lasted until midnight. It was Ssuperb, especially when eEd Sheeran sang my favourite song. I Tthink it iwas the best.....

In England, parents prepare for Easter by buying chocolate eggs and bunnies. On Saturday morning, they hide the treats in the garden, where children go looking for them. Some children recevive small gifts. Special games take place, such us egg rolling and egg tapping. There are some foods associated .....

We lit candles, played games, and ate snacks. We, spentding a nice evening. After a few hours, the lights turned back on.
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In life, we all have to go through a journey. eEach one of us starts at a different point. Some of us are born with talent, while others have talent that they might not know abofut andbut is recognized later in life.
What grabbed my attention was when
  Natasha, in poetry class, asked her professor in poetry class if she ha.....

When I was in primary school, everyone as my age loved reading comic books which, some of twhichem are still famous until today, such as Doraemon, Dragon Balls.., etc. At first, we read it just because it was interesting,. wWe felt that we were ion the adventures with the figucharacters in those books. Then, we realized that we h.....

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