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Willie and Liberty broke into a house on Crab Key and lived
there for a week. Crab Key was tiny and exclusive, belonging to an association whichthat had an armed security patrol. The houses on Crab Key were owned by people so wealthy that they were hardly ever there. They; they were elsewhere.
Liberty and Willie saw the guard daily. He was old, lonely
and rather gloryproud and puffed up,; his jaw pockedlocked in and his chest puffed out like a child concentrating on making a muscle. He told them that he had a cancer but that grapefruit was curing it. Willie and Liberty must have reminded him of people he knew, people who has looked appropriate living in a $300,000 cypress villa on the beach. He thought they were guests of the owners.
Willie did have a look to him. People would babble on to Willie as though in his implacability they would find their grace. Liberty couldn’t understand it herself.
WilliesWillie's detail was gone. He had a closed, sleek face whichthat did not transmit impressions. He was tideas tight as a jar of jam. People were crazy about Willie.

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